Dani
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They call me "Freckles"
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Post by Dani on Nov 22, 2005 17:46:19 GMT -5
Name: Danielle Denise Delaney Nicknames: Dani, Freckles House: Gryffindor Year: Same as Marauders, third, I think... Physical description: Blonde hair, blue eyes, thin, decent figure Personality: Stubborn, bright Background: Her mother is in jail, she's a Death Eater, and very manipulative. Dani is in foster care, with a good family who has taught her not all people are bad. The previous year, she was got pregnant and aborted the baby, because of how old she was and that the father was her foster father. She never told anyone, and cursed herself and told her caseworker her foster father did it and he went to jail for child abuse.
If possible, I would like Dani's foster family to be the Potters.
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Post by Anya Delioncour on Nov 22, 2005 21:10:35 GMT -5
No. No. No. No. I hate to be rude, but this is a literate site, and this is equal to DESPIE. Moron.
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Post by Devin Smithers on Nov 22, 2005 21:23:05 GMT -5
Sorry, but I have to agree with Anya... Wait why am I here again? -dissapears-
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Andromeda Black
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Gryffindor: Fifth Year- Prefect
But seriously... x3
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Post by Andromeda Black on Nov 22, 2005 21:41:45 GMT -5
-cough-
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Sirius Black
Student
Gryffindor:Third Year
Boo!
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Post by Sirius Black on Nov 23, 2005 9:09:07 GMT -5
This is precisely why we need Mooneh to sort out auditions again. I'm sorry. No offence, but this is despie-ism through and through. While there aren't any spelling mistakes or major grammmar mistake that I've noticed, there are one or two things that should be sorted - especially in a debut post.
Try sorting out your character, then we'll see if you can join, Danielle.
Ok... I'm gonna go post something in the general board now. I'd appreciate it if all members can read it. This place is in desperate need of a group discussion. A proper one, with a titled board. XD
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Dani
Student
They call me "Freckles"
Posts: 3
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Post by Dani on Nov 26, 2005 11:58:13 GMT -5
Could someone explain why I'm apparently a "moron" and what despie is?
Please don't call me names. It brings up really bad memories, and when you call new people names, they wont like or respect you. Not only is it rude and hurtful, it makes you look like an uneducated bitch. Don't mean to be rude, of course.
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Post by Regulus Black on Nov 26, 2005 15:08:53 GMT -5
A Despie is.... *thinks* a character that is a Mary-sue really. They're either perfect or they've had a bad horrible life. They're all me, me, me. Whine Whine Whine. Boo-hoo my life sucks, pity me. PLUS you made an oringal character's father bad... so thats why...
sorry...
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Dani
Student
They call me "Freckles"
Posts: 3
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Post by Dani on Nov 26, 2005 22:51:19 GMT -5
Thank you for explaining. Here's an updated bio:
Name: Danielle Denise Delaney Nicknames: Dani, Freckles House: Gryffindor Year: Same as Marauders, third, I think... Physical description: Blonde hair, blue eyes, thin, decent figure, her posture gives off this tough sense. Personality: Stubborn, bright Background: Her mother is in jail, she's a Death Eater, and very manipulative. Dani is in foster care, with a good family who has taught her not all people are bad. She has trouble letting go, and she visits her mother a lot, but she is not under the impression her mother is an innocent victim. She knows what she did and is ashamed of her, but she is still her mother.
Contary to the popular belief that foster kids are all bad, she gets good grades and works hard in school and such. She is interested in writing, and she writes very powerful personal essays.
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Post by Anya Delioncour on Nov 27, 2005 18:35:17 GMT -5
Don't worry, I know I'm a bitch. No need to call me one. ^^
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