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Post by robyn on Apr 10, 2005 7:36:25 GMT -5
This is a story I have been dieing to write up!
It's all about this Vampire who is being Hunted by a Vampire Hunter... He has Hunted her for a while and they are now stuck in this old house... She is hiding from him, trying not to get caught as she doesn't want to die... He actually, secretly, likes this girl but his father wants him to kill a Vampire so he has no choice... Their families have been against each other for centuries, that's why Marco (The Hunter) thinks killing Trixie (The Vampire) would be the best way to impress his father...
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Post by robyn on Apr 10, 2005 7:40:41 GMT -5
Trixie. A sixteen year old girl, at least, she looked like a girl. Her waist length, raven black hair hung loosely, perfectly straight except at the ends, where it flicked up gently, her eyes glimmered a deep grey. She wore a black t-shirt with the words 'Back Off' written in a deep purple, black, baggy denim jeans, fingerless gloves, also black and a pair of leather boots that were a deep black. A tattoo on her wrist read 'Trixie Marie Parker' she hated it, she much preferred her bat that was on her right upper arm. She had three piercings in each ear. Trixie smiled, being part Vampire was good, mixed with her Sorceress powers it made a deadly combination.
A creature stalked the shadows of the old House. His piercing blue eyes trained on a sixteen year old girl. A pale, thin hand moved a lock of blonde hair away from the Hunters eyes. He smiled "Finally, Trixie, we meet..." he hissed, Marco Black had awaited to see Eric Parker's daughter since he'd heard of her existence, he was ready for her, ready to kill her. The seventeen year old Hunter came from along line of Hunters who had each stalked the Parker family years, family rivalry, how sweet. He smiled as he approached her, clad entirely in black, black, baggy pants, a black t-shirt, black boots and a large black trench coat filled with various items, all meant for Trix's destruction.
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Post by robyn on Apr 10, 2005 7:45:31 GMT -5
Trix sat near the top of the stairs of the old House. When she had found the door locked shortly after arriving she had begun exploring. She sighed lightly, the House was boring, nothing much in it but she knew there was someone else there, someone who wasn't very friendly with Creatures like her. She tucked a strand of hair behind her ear idly as she looked around. Her eyes glinted lightly. ~Dad's gonna kill me~ she thought ~He lets me out of the House for one night to get some Blood as I haven't drunk in around a month and now I'm stuck in an old, abandoned House with something else...~ She jumped slightly as she heard something in the Shadows...
Marco grinned as he set off, the girl could hear him and sense him, he set off into another of the rooms, he arrived in what had once been the Kitchen and he began searching for something that could help him catch the girl...
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Post by robyn on Apr 10, 2005 7:49:10 GMT -5
Trix leapt down the last few stairs and she watched the Hunters back. ~Typical...~ she thought ~Just my luck to get trapped in this place with a Hunter... Just perfect...~ She found a dark space under the rickety stairs where she curled up to await the following night. That was when, she had decided, she would attempt to escape...
Marco grinned as he left the kitchen, it was empty and it was pointless searching the House, the only thing he knew was there besides the girl was a large box in one of the rooms on the First Floor. The box, he remembered from searching the House once before, was just about the right size for a small teenage girl, if you tied her up first...
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Post by robyn on Apr 10, 2005 8:00:02 GMT -5
~I'm trapped...~ she thought as she began to drift off into the world of peaceful rest ~There's no escape... No escape...~
Around three hours later Marco was getting annoyed, he couldn't find the girl, she was hiding somewhere and he was desperate to find her, he just had to... "Trixie..." he called "Trixie, you can't hide forever... You need blood... You can't live without it... You can't go on like this forever... He took out a small dagger and he slit a small gash into his arm, letting it bleed, luring her out of hiding...
Trix awoke to the sweet smell of blood and the sound of his voice... She knew he wanted to kill her, it was obvious but she just couldn't ignore it... She was so thirsty...
~I Can Hear His Voice... He's Calling For Me... I Can Hear His Heavy Footsteps... He's Coming Closer... I Can't Hide Forever... My Deep Breathing, Heavy Heartbeat... He'll Find Me Soon... He'll Kill Me Soon...~
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Post by robyn on Apr 10, 2005 8:03:35 GMT -5
((What I've posted here is only a short section taken from a place near the middle of the book... The only bit I posted that isn't from the begining is Trix's intro... It's just a Teaser for the book as I'm not finished the book yet, but Opinions are most welcome!! Thank you for your time... ^^))
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Post by TheTriplets on Apr 10, 2005 9:46:51 GMT -5
-Applauds- Amasing!! Absolutely Amasing!! Loved It!! Loved The Ending... So Creapy!! So Awesome!! ***** Five Stars!!
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Post by robyn on Apr 10, 2005 9:52:53 GMT -5
-Bows- Thankies... I try... -Glares At Five Stars- Five?? Realy?? Woah... ^^
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